Thema: Korrektur lesen, englisch

Hallo Hallo. (:
Ich wollte 'mal fragen ob sich vielleicht einer finden könnte der hier rüberhuschen kann und mir etwas helfen. Wär' ich sehr dankbar für und falls jemand Hilfe in Russich oder Deutsch braucht steh' ich auch gerne zur Verfügung.

Definition of the death penalty
Death as punishment was originally known in ancient times as ‘vendetta’. It was allowed to take revenge on a murderer of your relatives. Today is the death penalty the most controversial punishment world-wide. By definition it is a provided for by statute homicide as a sentence for a capital crime. In the ordinary criminal law the death penalty is usually imposed for murder. Some states also punish other direct and indirect crimes against life and health of persons with death:
- Trafficking (China)
- Robbery resulting in death (United States)
- Bank Robbery (Saudi Arabia)
- Abduction
- Drug trafficking and possession of drugs above a certain amount (Indonesia, Saudi Arabia, Malaysia, Singapore, Thailand, Taiwan)
- Rape (China, Saudi Arabia)
- terrorist attacks on oil and gas pipelines (India)
The act has been banned in many countries. There are over 140 countries, which have abolished this kind of punishment. 58 states continue the enforcement. The majority of executions which have taken place in year 2010 were in China, Iran, North Korea, Yemen and the United States. These states have an age requirement to fulfil the homicide, but there is also a possibility to levy a death penalty on a minor (only in certain cases).
The standard method of execution is the lethal injection. Other ways of execution are shooting, the gas chamber, hanging and the electric chair. The four most practiced execution methods in 2011 were:
- Lethal injection in China, Taiwan and USA
- Beheading in Saudi Arabia
- Hanging in Egypt, Afghanistan, Bangladesh, Iraq, North Korea and South Sudan
- Shooting in Belarus, China, Yemen, North Korea, Palestinian Territories and Somalia

wonach soll genau geschaut werden? inhalt oder rechtschreibung und grammatik? zum inhalt kann ich nicht viel sagen und ansonsten sind auch nur ein paar kleine schreibfehler drin...

pamplemousse

Definition of the death penalty
Death as punishment was originally known as vendetta in ancient times . It was allowed to take revenge on the murderer of your relatives. Today the death penalty is the most controversial punishment world-wide. By definition it is a provided for by statute homicide as a sentence for a capital crime (der Satz ist kompletter Kauderwelsch, komplett umformulieren). In the ordinary criminal law the death penalty is usually imposed for murder. Some states also punish other direct and indirect crimes against life and health of persons with death:
- Trafficking (China)
- Robbery resulting in death (United States)
- Bank Robbery (Saudi Arabia)
- Abduction
- Drug trafficking and possession of drugs above a certain amount (Indonesia, Saudi Arabia, Malaysia, Singapore, Thailand, Taiwan)
- Rape (China, Saudi Arabia)
- terrorist attacks on oil and gas pipelines (India)
The act has been banned in many countries. There are over 140 countries, which have abolished this kind of punishment. 58 states continue the enforcement. The majority of executions which have taken place in year 2010 were in China, Iran, North Korea, Yemen and the United States. These states have an age requirement to fulfil the homicide, but there is also a possibility to levy a death penalty on a minor (only in certain cases).
The standard method of execution is the lethal injection. Other ways of execution are shooting, the gas chamber, hanging and the electric chair. The four most practiced execution methods in 2011 were:
- Lethal injection in China, Taiwan and USA
- Beheading in Saudi Arabia
- Hanging in Egypt, Afghanistan, Bangladesh, Iraq, North Korea and South Sudan
- Shooting in Belarus, China, Yemen, North Korea, Palestinian Territories and Somalia

Ein "rüberhuschen" macht hier keinen großen Sinn, da das eigentliche Thema (siehe Überschrift) verfehlt wurde.

Für was brauchst du den Text?
@Arrtik

By definition it is a provided for by statute homicide as a sentence for a capital crime

Übersetz das mal